Thursday, 20 November 2014

Lachlan's dog (Written and typed by Lachlan himself)

I am learning to use joining words to explain an idea.

At Hode Park there was a pes of glass and my dog Jay steped on it. Bella  was ther to but she didt stand on any. Jays  par was bleding. Jay had to go to the vet because mum waeted him to so they cld look at his par. now   Jays   par   is      fix       now     He   can   walk     agein    it    was
along   long    time    ago.by   LACHLAN!


At Hoddy Park there was a piece of glass and my dog Jay stepped on it. Bella was there too but she didn't stand on any. Jay's paw was bleeding. Jay had to go to the vet because mum wanted him to so they could look at his paw. Now Jay's paw is fixed and now he can walk again. It was a long time ago.
 
I am relational today because I used two joining words in one sentence. 

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